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Strong (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

I wont let you bring me down, I wont let you cuss me, I wont let you ruin my life, I wont let you take away what i worked so hard to get, I wont let you ruin my life, Oh hell no! Because I'm strong, Oh yes! I am strong. I can make it i'm strong, Oh yes! Somehow I will make it on my own. I wont let you kill my inner self, I wont let you make me a scared freak, Oh hell no I won't, I'm strong and yes I can make it on my own. My friend blade will be there for me if things get tough, Oh yes I can make it, I wont let you say my poems are crap, I wont let you be rude to other people, I wont let you kill America, OH hell fuck no! I wont let you discriminate latinos or black people too. Because i am Maria and I am strong

razorgrin 22-Oct-02/11:36 AM
Hey look! Here is me, saying "your poems are crap". I guess now blade is going to come over to my house to suck me to death. This is a site where people comment on other people's poems. you know what? we even comment on the ones we don't like. If something is crap, we will say it is. And we are allowed to do so, even if some whiny, oversensitive bratling and her mall-goth friend don't want us to.




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