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Fireflies (Haiku) by mikejedw

Fireflies at night from time immemorial gettin' their freak on

hoopoe 19-May-02/3:06 AM
I love this
and you are USING the cliche "time immemorial" to signify itself, adn you evoke (intentionally?" soem Tennyson thing about bees - wotsit?? the murmur of innumerable bees"?? and there's "immemorial elms" somewhere too.
GREAT juxtapositon; get the joy of it, and the love of them




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