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Deadly Rape (Haiku) by HolyKnightOfFaith

Little boy runs quick. A Large man chases quicker, Boy found in gutter.

markb 19-May-02/3:04 AM
perhaps "faster" instead of "fast".

This lacks subtlety -- perhaps the hardness was intended to play off the haiku form, but it doesn't quite work for me.




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