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THE MISSING HEART (Sonnet) by Prince of Void

A MISSING HERAT FOLLOWS SWEAT SMELL OF ROSES THE WONDERS SETTLED DOWN IN LAST CHARMING EYES AND NIGHTMARE FELL DOWN IN THE FACE OF SMOOTH SUN THE LOUD VOICES TRON SILKY DREAMS OF SKIES THE BLANK PAPER FACES THE WORDS OF BIRDES AND MINE THE SIMPLE BEAUTY FLEW AND RESTTING ON REYS THE HURTS OF YESTERDAYS WAS LEFT BEHIND FAR BEYS RIDING THE HORSE TO EDIT EAST AND WEST SUN IN DAWN OF MY LOVE

Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/9:51 AM
OUCH, I THINK I MUST BE DEAF. THIS ISN'T A SONNET, BY THE WAY. A SONNET HAS FOURTEEN LINES AND RHYMES. SORRY TO DISSAPOINT YOU. HERAT HAS INDEED BEEN MISSING FOR A LONG TIME. 'TRON'? 'RESTTING'? 'REYS'? 'BEYS'? WHAT DO ALGERIAN RULERS HAVE TO DO WITH THIS?




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