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Hunt (Free verse) by cobalt

Greener than the leaves irridescent heads glint against a dun river's shimmery lap, lulled Instantly uncradled, slivers of blue flash from unfurling wings burst heavenward as shot shatters silence in the reeds He sits silent, blinded awaits the fall

god'swife 21-Oct-02/9:14 AM
Excellent edit.




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