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Faith (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Fire leaps at the sky, trying to lick every star it can reach. Does it not know itself? Is it not aware of it's earthly origin? Yet it refuses to quit jumping. Reach fire, reach! Leap away!

INTRANSIT 21-Oct-02/8:06 AM
If I am reading you correctly, you're showing me the tails side of my quarter. That is scary, I wanted a positive message here and got duality instead, HMMMM. You definitely pulled something deeper than I had intended. I like that AND I'm saddened by it at the same time.




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