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Faith (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Fire leaps at the sky, trying to lick every star it can reach. Does it not know itself? Is it not aware of it's earthly origin? Yet it refuses to quit jumping. Reach fire, reach! Leap away!

<~> 21-Oct-02/7:55 AM
it is in the title: faith. faith is an amalgamated energy, given life by the masses. and its fire can be warming or searing. youare trying to make it self aware. there is danger here. there is heat aplenty without something as powerful as faith being given vision, nevermind thought. yes? so your innocent-seeming poem frightens me.




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