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Faith (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Fire leaps at the sky, trying to lick every star it can reach. Does it not know itself? Is it not aware of it's earthly origin? Yet it refuses to quit jumping. Reach fire, reach! Leap away!

INTRANSIT 21-Oct-02/7:50 AM
Just curious, what hangs you up about s-2? Ithink, technically I was pointing out that the fire wasn't self aware. Am I missing something? Do tell.




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