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One liners for the ladies (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I saw you in the clouds today. You winked. I smiled. I'm seeing a lot of you in our kids. That means there's more of you for me to enjoy. The clover feeds bees honey, the way you feed my soul.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Oct-02/5:58 AM
I knew someone was going to say that about the middle stanza. Just because it has the words 'our kids' in it. You wouldn't think it was so special if it said 'our ethnic minorities' instead, would you? You filthy racist! I hate you! I HATE YOU!




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