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Faith (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Fire leaps at the sky, trying to lick every star it can reach. Does it not know itself? Is it not aware of it's earthly origin? Yet it refuses to quit jumping. Reach fire, reach! Leap away!

Christof 21-Oct-02/4:28 AM
Something of the Prometheus myth about this - I might cut out the 'Silly fire' line and try to compress the last four lines into another three line stanza, but that's just me, I like regular forms. Your central idea is good.




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