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Impervious (Haiku) by heart

Bright sun, sky smiling on sparkling leaves, warbling wren. Bouncing off tired soul.

god'swife 18-Oct-02/8:36 PM
Oh yes! Tired soul, of course, and bouncing not sticking. No wonder I didn't quite get the title. The scene swept me away.




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