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regret. (Free verse) by darby pyn

What a hollow faith you have in mind to leave your memories behind you know yourself much better than you think. bored contention bleeds late arrivals eyes on contact stare reprisals. numb a promise with contradiction lie in your sleep wake up alone. spinning down above my face focused on my past mistakes. naked like a new born poem caught between hell and home.

darby pyn 18-Oct-02/8:00 PM
I just saw it Im writing while listening to the buzzcocks.
so Im making alot of spelling errors. sorry.
p.s. I loved carmen and the devil. you and dark angel
are my favorite poets on this site...yes I said dark angel.




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