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regret. (Free verse) by darby pyn

What a hollow faith you have in mind to leave your memories behind you know yourself much better than you think. bored contention bleeds late arrivals eyes on contact stare reprisals. numb a promise with contradiction lie in your sleep wake up alone. spinning down above my face focused on my past mistakes. naked like a new born poem caught between hell and home.

god'swife 18-Oct-02/7:36 PM
Caught between hell and home is fucking fanstastic. this quickly turns to caios at "bored contention..."




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