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removed 5/8/04 due to impending publication. the book is still open for submissions: http://www.sirruspoe.com/mindmutations.html

<~> 18-Oct-02/4:04 PM
the question was added in the second writing. yes, it is a work in progress, and will no doubt undergo radical revision. i will take the question out, though. after my long drive home, i read it aloud and i do not like it, so, dahling p&k, out it goes.

i am going to hear the blues tonight, and when i return, no doubt i will have more and more insight. cafe 9. i have told you of it before. it is a crossroads.




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