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removed 5/8/04 due to impending publication. the book is still open for submissions: http://www.sirruspoe.com/mindmutations.html

poetandknowit 18-Oct-02/2:26 PM
I am not a big fan of asking questions in poems. Te me a poet has figured something out, gained some clarity or understanding from questions posed and that forces the writing. You seem to still be pondering something and maybe the poem is there. I really like the last stanza and the implied usage of the "what's in a name" is most excellent, but I still think this is a work in progress.




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