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Greener than the leaves irridescent heads glint against a dun river's shimmery lap, lulled Instantly uncradled, slivers of blue flash from unfurling wings burst heavenward as shot shatters silence in the reeds He sits silent, blinded awaits the fall
cobalt
18-Oct-02/1:56 PM
uncradled, as in no longer safe--heavenward, because of the implied death the shots will bring. y or n?
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