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removed 5/8/04 due to impending publication. the book is still open for submissions: http://www.sirruspoe.com/mindmutations.html

Christof 18-Oct-02/7:54 AM
'brothers and lovers'? You have been paying close heed to Mrs G's work, I think. I wonder if the second stanza needs some more clarification? I'm not quite sure of how the inter-relationships work.




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