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Bowed (Free verse) by <~>

Did I find a chink momentarily bared when I loosed that straight and simple missive? Why did I dare? I will no more hide my eyes, it said for me who could not bring my lips to form the words nor my form near yours for fear of being pierced Once taut then emptied of quiver like a feathered thought I flew to you, true and struck at the heart

Christof 18-Oct-02/7:23 AM
The tensions behind this are so powerful. For those who cannot speak, the written word is such an erotic tool. This balances up fear and anticipation, secrecy and disclosure. Woof.

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