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On a chill morning (Free verse) by razorgrin

A stranger is standing in the driveway, clouded in plumes of frozen breath Last night's frost creeps into his old bones to numb his hands and feet, yet he still stands, the morning's feeble rays breaking on his face. His eyes are upcast toward my curtained window, rapt. A fascinated gaze broken by my leaving the house, rounding the corner. I level my eyes on his, a basilisk stare and a wordless conversation ending as I drive off toward the rising sun.

Tintagiles 17-Oct-02/1:45 PM
I stand by my opinion. And sweetheart, for your pebble-throwing to have any effect, I'd have to be there, asleep. And care. And we know how rare that is. If you break the window you get to pay for it and I'll do horrible things to you. If we're not allowed to mention what we consider a slight bump in your work... Come now, dearie, as if you wouldn't mention a bump in ours if it really jumped at you.




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