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Girlz (Free verse) by liljsmith87

There are these 2 girls and I love them more then anything They have everything I want And nothing but them is anymore important to me But there of coarse are some problems Ones that arent easy to fix I try my best to solve em But of coarse I cant get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch Who, used to be my friend Until she got pissed Made one mistake And she put me on "THE LIST" So now Angie isnt my friend All because I went wrong Terryn made my life miserable Wished at first I didnt belong But then I look at the good side Happy the other girl I love is still my friend And try to make sure This friendship wont end.

limonade 16-Oct-02/5:21 PM
There are these two girls and I love them more than anything
They have everything I want
And nothing but them is anymore important to me

But there of course are some problems
Ones that are not easy to fix
I try my best to solve them
But of course I can't get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch

Who, used to be my friend
Until she got pissed
Made one mistake
And she put me on "THE LIST"

So now Angie isn't my friend
All because I went wrong
Terryn made my life miserable
Wished at first I didnt belong

But then I look at the good side
Happy the other girl I love is still my friend
And try to make sure
This friendship won't end.

(I took the liberty of correcting your spelling)




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