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I am Cuba (Lyric) by cacophony

I am Cuba you're the States You're the limelight on my mistakes I'm a sprocket spinning round You're a crank pushing me down You are the moon and I'm the tide You pull the strings while I am blind You're T.D.Jakes. I am your flock I'm a heart murmur you're like a clock

Christof 16-Oct-02/7:56 AM
I think you should cut the last four lines - 'wrote' just isn't grammatical here and spoils the verse, although you need it for your rhyme - and anyway, the first stanza is really strong on its own.




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