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a genius (Free verse) by moonUnit

I can see it now at a fragile age your first love second love whatever love that you should want because you will not be denied, have never been denied. I used to rest my head between your shoulderblades and listen to you talking we all knew you were so brilliant. you are more than I will ever have the chance to be but I don't mourn for that anymore. I used to break down at the very mention of your name and shake, and cry it's been three years and still i love you.

razorgrin 16-Oct-02/7:19 AM
the end makes me think of a cut-out picture shrine with incense and candles.




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