poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8.

poetandknowit15 Oct 2002

I know you rock and roller, spoken word types are all over the place but this takes the cake. There are some fantastic fucking-blow-me-away images in here and some shit (I don't like the first three stanzas). I like the mix of realism and magic realism, but at times, you completely lose me. But it worked. I am off to the bar.