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Bowed (Free verse) by <~>

Did I find a chink momentarily bared when I loosed that straight and simple missive? Why did I dare? I will no more hide my eyes, it said for me who could not bring my lips to form the words nor my form near yours for fear of being pierced Once taut then emptied of quiver like a feathered thought I flew to you, true and struck at the heart

INTRANSIT 15-Oct-02/11:51 AM
Maybe some day I'll be able to graciously flow the pain of romance the way you two ladies do. Until then, I will be happy watching the pros.9




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