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Daywalker (Free verse) by Blade

He Stalks Hunting through every Darkened street, Passing by each flickering lamppost. Hastening to find his soul. The blood lust rises Searing blood red anger, deep behind his eyes.

Tintagiles 11-Oct-02/9:02 PM
My dea girl, please. We're not all excellent writers, but a large number of us can spell. Which is apparently beyond your intellectual capability. And this particular poem is rather bad. If he eliminated the comma at the end of the second line, even that would increase its value greatly. Though it would still not make it very good. He has done no shit to us than force us to read an extremely bad poem -- the same way that you have done nothing to us but make us read bad poetry, save that you add the insult of atrociously bad spelling to it. Take a basic English course and then we can speak




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