poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator.

Ninoy_Instigator9 Oct 2002

I asked what is wrong in THIS poem! Where does it show ANYWHERE in this poem that I would cage her up. All this poem talks about is how I would work hard for her. Please illustrate to me in this poem where it says I would cage her up