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Sunshine (Free verse) by alexander

My roof blew off today Now I can see the sun shine And it can see me

strider1 9-Oct-02/11:41 AM
What is this simple fare trying to appeal to the humour of the proletariat-it made me guffaw which indicates it is not altogether bad-maybe try a re-write at night would be my recommendation-8/10




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