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ITS A SHAMBLES (Free verse) by lukehanney

You're wet and humiliated, With this club you're not affliated, Soggy steak and kidney pie, On a cold, wet day in mid-july, Arms and legs aching and sore, All of this for a 0-0 draw.

god'swife 9-Oct-02/10:36 AM
Personally, I've never liked inversions. I'd much rather sacrifice the rhyme. I'm a big sports fan. Baseball, followed closely by what is known here as soccer. It a bitch not to score. the inversion kills this for me. I want you to tell me more about the play.




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