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Drunken note #1 (Free verse) by blackball

i've gone below the surface searching for thought without pain, you surge for ecstasy without love you've gone to another plane hope for indecision among the masses hold true to your hatred without finding a real love go under and realize that what you've found is deeper and stranger than love

poetandknowit 9-Oct-02/12:19 AM
Of course, you think it is good. Because it is good. It is just young and it is blowing away its intended audience. But how many successful writers are 19 or 20? There is a reason for that. Experience. It may be a cliche, it may be a stereotype, but it is everything. She has the tools and the talent. The rest with come with age.




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