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Drunken note #1 (Free verse) by blackball

i've gone below the surface searching for thought without pain, you surge for ecstasy without love you've gone to another plane hope for indecision among the masses hold true to your hatred without finding a real love go under and realize that what you've found is deeper and stranger than love

blackball 9-Oct-02/12:11 AM
one last thought before i leave...it's funny how you say that limonade's poetry has a young...or "undergrad" feel to it...because the vast majority of my teenage friends think it's great but most of my adult friends say the same kind of stuff you guys do. guess i'll just have to grow up before i can write really good stuff like you and god'swife...once again...no sarcasm. night all




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