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Drunken note #1 (Free verse) by blackball

i've gone below the surface searching for thought without pain, you surge for ecstasy without love you've gone to another plane hope for indecision among the masses hold true to your hatred without finding a real love go under and realize that what you've found is deeper and stranger than love

poetandknowit 9-Oct-02/12:02 AM
If you come across Sherman Alexie's (he is a writer that is not dead) "Alcoholic Love Poems," read them. It might help you clear these up a bit.




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