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love your mother: (Free verse) by Sapphire

rolling green hills and salty sea sprays carry me home, take me away cold deep cracks of mother earths viens dip in my toes, cast off my dialy chains rich warm terra firma to trod underfoot bliss, ease my day, onward i plod

anonymous 14-May-02/9:27 AM
it's just so.... wrong. especially the trod/plod rhyme... ick.




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