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what part (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

what part of love is desire? is it this part, where i am watching you in the same way that i might listen to a quiet music and you walking across the room like the loudest siren fill me, empty me or is there no part for desire in love and i am failing when faced by you in your summer shirt

anonymous 14-May-02/9:17 AM
something about the blandness of the last line loses me. Maybe you should just drop it... leaving the last line: "and i am failing/when faced by you"




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