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Drunken note #1 (Free verse) by blackball

i've gone below the surface searching for thought without pain, you surge for ecstasy without love you've gone to another plane hope for indecision among the masses hold true to your hatred without finding a real love go under and realize that what you've found is deeper and stranger than love

Jigg 6-Oct-02/5:37 PM
Well it sorta started quite badly, went no where in the middle and tailed off towards the end but apart from that, splendid...great...sterling effort. No sorry justa touch of wry poet humour there (this is steeped in irony, so please don't hunt me down and slay me) liked it liked it a lot 10 will do me, Tommy!




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