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Cheap Thrills (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky

I would like to meet God. Where do I get a priority number? Is the line going to be long? I'd hate to think, I'd have to wait for hours. But then again, I do that For a roller coaster ride. When I have my conversation with Him, Will it only last two minutes? Is God A cheap thrill?

<~> 4-Oct-02/7:56 PM
the night is lovely in a ghastly way in connecticut; but i am HOME!. ah. nice.

now, as to this poem, yes, it is a good idea, but is hastily and sloppily executed, and so, it disappoints. free verse does not mean lax verse.

god is neither dead nor alive. so there.




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