poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky.

<~>4 Oct 2002

the night is lovely in a ghastly way in connecticut; but i am HOME!. ah. nice.

now, as to this poem, yes, it is a good idea, but is hastily and sloppily executed, and so, it disappoints. free verse does not mean lax verse.

god is neither dead nor alive. so there.