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Birth (Haiku) by nentwined

warm evelopement nurturing bath, burning love ends with explosion

Tarquin De La Bog 2-Oct-02/2:00 PM
Nice, apart from the final line. 8. It's a little bit flat. 72 anonymous votes of 10 though? Marking your own work only cheats yourself. And makes you appear lonely. Don't stoop that low.




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