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Fall from Love's Grace (Free verse) by loneshadow29

made a few changes of "Flight of a Broken Heart" (including the title), hopefully it's a little better --------------------------------------------- Falling swiftly past memories Of love I once thought she cherished The long nights, holding her so close feeling the rhythm of her heartbeat as my love blankets her heart, keeping it safe From winter's frigid touch Each kiss oh so gentle, yet full of passion Looking into her sapphire eyes Shining in the twilight, oh true beauty to behold So much like a dream, like heaven made true Tears welling, wishing it didn't end To see her smile, oh god her smile A smile that would warm the coldest heart To once more, feel her next to me to taste the sweetness of her lips But suddenly, I strike the cold concrete of reality The heart which soared from her love shatters against the harsh truth That she no longer craves my loving words nor my gentle touch she has moved on, full of life as I lie here, broken and alone shrouded in sorrow, the heart beats no more and the rest is only silence

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