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Life of a Cubicle Dweller (Free verse) by loneshadow29

Lifeless gray Filling the space I live Looking over cubicle walls To a view of day???s wakening Watching as the sun shines bright Over trees and skies of blue Wishing I could be among the geese As they soar through the air But alas, I am bound To this lowly cage Until the evening comes When the sun lays to rest But soon, I will be able to bask In the warmth of the sun But for now, I must stay For dawn to dusk is a way of life In this compact little space I must call my home

loneshadow29 1-Oct-02/9:15 AM
I'll see what I can add on to it... I think I might have a few little ideas that could give it a little more... thanks for the suggestion! :o)




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