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I Wish (Free verse) by liljsmith87

I wish skies were always blue. The grass was always green. Mountaintops were snowy white, And trees were full of leaves. I wish love could not be broken, And feelings could not be hurt. All people were kind to each other, And some stories weren't so short. I wish one day I'd have a girl of mine, We would be forever in love, And we would never fight, But of course This is unheard of.

harrytuttle 1-Oct-02/7:16 AM
Another good title would be "The glass is half empty."




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