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Married (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Do not build your spouse, for they came to you already assembled. Instead tether them, and fly them like a kite.

INTRANSIT 1-Oct-02/5:52 AM
Thanks, you really felt this the way I did! Exactly, in fact. Ido see what they mean with the tether thing, but I cant bring myself to morph it. I'm afraid it will lose its (panache)?




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