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Tide (Free verse) by <~>

Sitting on the seawall Before the summer storm she said Something's slipped away Seven months slid by, and Snow laces the tide and Rides the currents in the greyed sky And chills my cheeks, burning Finds me drifting in memory and Furious with my own leaking With all this seeking a Meaning

nentwined 30-Sep-02/3:49 PM
this keeps me tottering on the edge of each line until the end -- a very nice feeling, especially on caffeine. :)




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