poetandknowit30 Sep 2002

"The air is cool, the sun is hot,
In between seasons, and time's forgot"

I do not like this, no I do not, I do not like this I think it flops. I guess I want more from the ending. If it was as good as the first stanza, you would have it. I am not going to vote until you quit stopping off at the bar before coming home.