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Cheap Thrills (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky

I would like to meet God. Where do I get a priority number? Is the line going to be long? I'd hate to think, I'd have to wait for hours. But then again, I do that For a roller coaster ride. When I have my conversation with Him, Will it only last two minutes? Is God A cheap thrill?

poetandknowit 30-Sep-02/11:29 AM
Look, I don't feel like arguing with idiots who think they are writers today. You "told" me too much and forgot to show me really much of anything. It is a top five rule in creative writing, especially poetry. Show, don't tell. And in an attempt at a clever ditty, it is all the more important. You left nothing to the reader. And you are welcome for the 3, I thought I was being kind. I will give it more thought next time.




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