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#16 (Haiku) by mikejedw

Would today's new chill, its drizzle and graying light, be here if I weren't?

Nicholas Jones 29-Sep-02/4:23 AM
The point is, it's pretty selfish to assume the world wouldn't exist without you. I took the poem to be an ironic assertion of this fact. I also think it is pretty whimsical, somehow, which I think is often a good thing in poetry.




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