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Twisted Swords of Love & Hate (Free verse) by DreamMachine

Twisted swords of love and hate, There is no other force at work now except fate, A knife shatters, But I hear no cry, Except a song of birds with no lullaby, And for this I know i've spilled my blood, But I don't know how much more I could, A river turns red as I lie there still, But time stops at my will, And as I lie there half awake, I think of a distant time and my mistake, A portal opens and the door is shown, But instead I am left there all alone, To wonder this earth for countless years, But my time does not fade, It just dissappears

DreamMachine 28-Sep-02/3:58 PM
Thankyou all of you! ( the avg rank of this poem was 5.17 but I had to edit it due to the fact that I discovered a spelling error in it...please revote it if you havent already, thankyou! )




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