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down (Free verse) by siberian

what will be when i see the truth of him. it has been so long.. yet now he comes back. at a distant i see him walking my way, he comes close to..i am speechless i have nothing to say, "hello", i heard the voice, the voice that abonded me, abonded before i couldnt even walk, understand, see. what i will do i do not know nor will i ever. everytime i think about what happened i quiver. i will never decide, to say it was okay, for all the letters that lied. I fell on the side walk and just looked down, to stay here im am destained for ever, for no where i am bound.

knickytoy 27-Sep-02/1:21 PM
distant=distance, abonded=abandoned,
couldnt=could(or at least couldn't)
destained=destined
A pretty picture of paralysis.




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