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West Sands, late afternoon in winter (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones

I feel as if I am nowhere, As if I am the space around my own body And even that is barren. The view out to the estaury Reminds me of myself And that I am barely here - Just surrounded by Sky beach and sea. I look at my reflection In the moving waters, And laugh at the idea Of jumping in after myself.

INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/4:17 AM
If more people would "jump in after themselves",they'd be a lot happier. Bravo.




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