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Homecoming (Free verse) by ObiWonKn

Coffee eyes, Skin painted In a perfect pastel You stand there With your flawless smile My head resting on your shoulder As you hold me Closer Musk and vanilla Make me high As my lips brush your neck Misplaced most of my life, Standing here now, Seems I?m finally coming home

nentwined 12-May-02/8:30 PM
the first two stanzas seem to be leading up to something, but I can't tell what angle you're taking with the final. perhaps more could be explained, somehow?




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