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Disbeliever (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

I choose not to believe in that which I cannot see That in which cannot be proven or touched Many say faith is all I need and I reply back Has faith ever needed you God has not talked to me on the phone Nor has he visited me in a dream I wish the bible would be classified as a fiction novel Do know that everything I have just said I do not believe but do know any faith inside of me has died a long time ago

Christof 26-Sep-02/7:21 AM
I think I would lose the last couplet and the word 'fiction' and then this would stand as a perfect statement.




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