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Twisted Swords of Love & Hate (Free verse) by DreamMachine

Twisted swords of love and hate, There is no other force at work now except fate, A knife shatters, But I hear no cry, Except a song of birds with no lullaby, And for this I know i've spilled my blood, But I don't know how much more I could, A river turns red as I lie there still, But time stops at my will, And as I lie there half awake, I think of a distant time and my mistake, A portal opens and the door is shown, But instead I am left there all alone, To wonder this earth for countless years, But my time does not fade, It just dissappears

nonee 25-Sep-02/9:57 PM
waoh ! ... it's good ....it's really good ..or maybe i'm screwed to say so but it's good ..... the words just seem to just flow without any hinderance .. maybe i'm going to keep it on my desktop for some days now....




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